Bloomberg outcomes

Coming to the end of this project, i came out with this outcome which i though was a good option but it seems that i slightly went off brief since i was told that the constructive lines have no relation to the 'Comma' exhibition. this project was not one of my best projects but i was slightly disappointed that what i did went a bit off brief. As you can see, the following images are the step which i did to design the publication.

van doesburg

I went to the Tate and looked at this exhibition as i was curious to find out what sort of work he did and i also needed to be inspired for the bloomberg project.
His work were really appealing to me as i was stupefied by how effective constructivism because of the composition of all them shapes. One of the piece that amazed me was the big one where i think there are three/four people playing poker but you can only see it if you move further away from it. The image below is what i have been talking about.

Bloomberg Space

For this project, we have been asked to design a book that would be showing twenty artist work which are being exhibited at the bloomberg gallery. The twenty artists all together formed 'COMMA' which is the exhibition name. Each artist had their own referred colour and their own comma style (comma changing forms on individual artist).
It is my first time designing a book so i do hope that everything will go accordingly planned.